Sunday, July 22, 2012

The Add-On Story

You may have done this before, but I love doing this.

I'll write a sentence to start a story. Then you have to write a comment with a sentence that keeps the story moving on. People will keep adding to the story, making the characters doing many things.

RULES:

  • Sentences you write must be in a comment on this post.
  • Have fun.
  • Everything must be G-rated. No swearing/cursing (some call it "cussing"), no blood, no violence. You can make it wierd, like "suddenly he turned into a lion with three heads and the lion ate five trees," but nothing PG or above. Thanks!
  • Don't end the story suddenly. Wait until I give the heads-up.
  • Please write only 1-3 sentences.
  • No arguing with each other. No bullying. Everyone be nice to each other. We want this to be a friendly environment.
Remember that I have the authority to delete comments.

I will let you know when we're about to wrap up the story, so we can all write the ending together.

Here's the starting sentence:

On the top of a hill was an old, dilapidated building.

4 comments:

Thatriot said...

As I stared at it, I saw a young man walk out from the red, crooked side door. The contrast was amusing.

Gillman329 said...

(By the way, I'll be writing in third person)

The man was holding a black bag filled with something.

Thatriot said...

(Are we the same person, or two different people, then?)

As his steps grew faster, a bit of blue material fell out of the bag. The breeze blew and the foreign object was swept to a nearby river. Sunlight glinted off of it's shiny exterior.

Gillman329 said...

(This was done in last year's November NaNoWriMo on the YWP, on the homeschooled section of the forum, and everybody controlled the characters, it's not like roleplaying)

A person named Ralph was spying on the cabin. He saw the blue object come out and watched as the man ran to the river and try to retrieve it.